yo ppl
here is some more story
i really want you guys to tell me if something is wrong or grammer mistake so ty
i gonna try post more ( weekly)
hope you guys like it
TE READ THIS YOU NEED TO READ CHAPTER 1
http://gbatemp.net/index.php?showtopic=106...p;#entry1421093
Chapter 2
The mountain road
It was cold. The sun wasn't fully up. The wind was blowing. And there I was standing,half a sleep. The old man looked energetic as always. “ORION are you ready for some pain†said the old man. I looked with no expression at the old man. Why we must start training so early I asked. Because the early birds catch the chicks.
Old man it's the early birds catch the worms: Ow well yeah it's the same. =P
well lets start to test your basic skills. You see that mountain there. And he pointed to a big mountain far away. I give you a hour to climb it and return to the foot. .-.-' Are you alright old man you say weird things and I knocked his head.
Kid I don't accept excuses. Until you climbed the mountain and return in a hour I will no longer train you train.
‘But it's impossible’ said Orion. I give you 3 days. What's the point of climbing a stupid mountain. The old man looked at me and said: Kid listen up. The road tho the mountain is hard you must go trough a several dangerous paths. Small paths and not every path leads you to the top. So Kid use your instinct.
It is a training for stamina,courage,balance,instinct, the first one is very important because you must sometimes fight long battles till the enemy is tired. Thats why you must train your stamina.
“I understandâ€I replied. I looked at the old man, And what are you gonna do? Are you coming with me? I asked ,the old man looked at me an said Haha I have more important things to do.
What things are more important to watch my training?
The old man smiled at me and answered: Well uhmm sleeping eating and watch you having a hard time.
Damn you old man I said.
Well let's start training kid. START he yelled. And slapped me on the back.
here is some more story
i really want you guys to tell me if something is wrong or grammer mistake so ty
i gonna try post more ( weekly)
hope you guys like it
TE READ THIS YOU NEED TO READ CHAPTER 1
http://gbatemp.net/index.php?showtopic=106...p;#entry1421093
Chapter 2
The mountain road
It was cold. The sun wasn't fully up. The wind was blowing. And there I was standing,half a sleep. The old man looked energetic as always. “ORION are you ready for some pain†said the old man. I looked with no expression at the old man. Why we must start training so early I asked. Because the early birds catch the chicks.
Old man it's the early birds catch the worms: Ow well yeah it's the same. =P
well lets start to test your basic skills. You see that mountain there. And he pointed to a big mountain far away. I give you a hour to climb it and return to the foot. .-.-' Are you alright old man you say weird things and I knocked his head.
Kid I don't accept excuses. Until you climbed the mountain and return in a hour I will no longer train you train.
‘But it's impossible’ said Orion. I give you 3 days. What's the point of climbing a stupid mountain. The old man looked at me and said: Kid listen up. The road tho the mountain is hard you must go trough a several dangerous paths. Small paths and not every path leads you to the top. So Kid use your instinct.
It is a training for stamina,courage,balance,instinct, the first one is very important because you must sometimes fight long battles till the enemy is tired. Thats why you must train your stamina.
“I understandâ€I replied. I looked at the old man, And what are you gonna do? Are you coming with me? I asked ,the old man looked at me an said Haha I have more important things to do.
What things are more important to watch my training?
The old man smiled at me and answered: Well uhmm sleeping eating and watch you having a hard time.
Damn you old man I said.
Well let's start training kid. START he yelled. And slapped me on the back.
