Some guy I know wrote this poem for some girl
"Her hair falls across her shoulders
The black silk waterfall
It crushes me inside,
my body is in turmoil
That smile of bright sunshine
It warms everything that recieves it
And when that's me,
i become so much more than i am
She loves that fender
But not as much as i love her
What i'd do for her,
anything, anything
I'd love to hear her play
If it's anything like i imagine
the feelings it would expose
like the wind scouring away at a clifface"
What do you lot think of it. I'm not a fan at all.
"Her hair falls across her shoulders
The black silk waterfall
It crushes me inside,
my body is in turmoil
That smile of bright sunshine
It warms everything that recieves it
And when that's me,
i become so much more than i am
She loves that fender
But not as much as i love her
What i'd do for her,
anything, anything
I'd love to hear her play
If it's anything like i imagine
the feelings it would expose
like the wind scouring away at a clifface"
What do you lot think of it. I'm not a fan at all.