Post numero duo

-----Preface-----
Like I said in a comment in my last post, I'm making shit up as I go along. This probably means there will be irregularities within the story but I'll try to keep those to a minimum. If it's something I feel must change then I'll edit the previous post and leave a note at the bottom of the latest. Oh and I don't know if I want to carry on with this, at the start (yesterday lol) I was all excited, I had a vague storyline I wanted to write about, and a sort of ending to work towards but now I'm not too sure heh, I've included a poll to see what you guys think.
I was planning to write this earlier today but I only started like an hour ago and now I am le tired. I just decided to post something rather than nothing so here's what I wrote so far:



Ok so you all know that my father, after a year of no contact what so ever, ordered me to pilot some huge mecha and I ended my post with that. Well after that, I chickened out. Fear gripped me and made me shrink away.. I took a step back my mouth opening and closing but forming no words. I didn't want to do it, I couldn't do it. You may now all call me a coward. For that is exactly how I felt. My father gave me one more glance, it lasted a mear second but it was enough to relay his emotion. It was indifference. He did not care. It made no difference that I was his only son, his own flesh and blood, what he wanted was progress and I could not give him that.

"Bring out Rei"
"But.. Her condition is still not stable enough for her to walk unsupported, let alone pilot 01"
My father unfazed by the pleads of the woman said once again. "Bring out Rei"
With a sigh the woman signalled to a couple of guards who seemed to understand and walked out. Within a few minutes they were back with a sickly looking girl. She had short pageboy style hair, a very petite frame and striking eyes. Her arm was also in a sling, her left eye patched and head bandaged.
Without blinking or changing her blank expression she says in a quiet voice, "I'm ready to go"

I don't know if my father planned this, if he did it worked. As soon as I saw her I knew I could not let her get injured any more than she was right now. I had felt a strong urge to protect this girl, whoever she was. I took a deep breathe and said "I'll...I'll do it.."
As if expecting this my father says one word and leaves. "Good"




EDIT: Eh I don't get how the poll thing works.. Nevermind, just post what you think in the comments.

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Much shorter than the first post. You barely advanced the story in this entry. I want more!
 
Ye I was just thinking of just ditching the whole thing but wanted to know what you guys thought. One reader will be enough:P I'll make a longer one this evening.
 

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