A little crazy on the c4ds. I don't like the fact that the focal is black and white yet the effects are coloured. I've seen people pull it off well, but this one isn't quite there yet. It would be nice if your flow was a little more natural and complex rather than a simple flow that seems a bit forced.
Also, the text placement seems a little random. Really brings down "wow" in your tag. You'd be surprised at how small things can greatly affect tags.
Not bad, but definitely better than the latter of people here, no offense to anyone here btw.