My first Blog( My first critic)

Well last month I started writing a Fanfiction, and right now it's up to chapter 4, but I've stopped updating for a month already because I was Sooo busy for the whole month,

today, after Various File-Hosting sites got shutdown lately, I suddenly felt like writing something so I decided to actually log in for the first time in 32 days and I just realized that I got a new review( At first I was like OH YEAH!) and it says this

[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Having read all four chapters of this story, I would like to say that I probably shouldn't have read any further than the premise.[/font]

[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]I don't like the premise of this story. I don't like that you felt the need to base this entirely on Yuuno turning into a girl, when you might have been able to create a story just as good, or better, without doing so.[/font]

[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]It also seems as though you don't have a grasp of any of the characters actual personalities, but are just throwing into it what you want, where you want, no matter how the characters actually interact.[/font]


[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"](My heart just broke) It was very hard for me to accept that. I know i should just take this into consideration and improve the style of my writing, but this put me down to no mood at all...[/font]
[font=verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif]So for now, i'm gonna do more research (And hopefully get more better reviews) and do a better job writting, [/font]


[font="verdana, arial, helvetica, sans-serif"]Well i think that's it, so yeah My first blog about me ranting shit up...[/font]

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Hells Malice
Lol @ someone who reads fanfics criticizing someone who writes them...
Instead of a fanfic, write a unique story. Fanfic writers are essential the T-ball writers of the world. It's a huge beacon of unoriginality and uncreativeness. It's basically a waste of time since you really wont develop as a writer by doing fanfics.

But hell someone reviewing that you "don't have a grasp of any of the characters actual personalities" goes for every fanfic writer. All of them. Sure you can pinpoint a character pretty well, but if it's not canon...it's not what the character would think, so that's a moot point entirely.
 
jarejare3
[quote name='Hells Malice' timestamp='1327340732'] Lol @ someone who reads fanfics criticizing someone who writes them...Instead of a fanfic, write a unique story. Fanfic writers are essential the T-ball writers of the world. It's a huge beacon of unoriginality and uncreativeness. It's basically a waste of time since you really wont develop as a writer by doing fanfics. But hell someone reviewing that you "don't have a grasp of any of the characters actual personalities" goes for every fanfic writer. All of them. Sure you can pinpoint a character pretty well, but if it's not canon...it's not what the character would think, so that's a moot point entirely. [/quote]

Yeah I'm gonna write my own Story as soon as i'm done with this one, Thanks for the comment though made me feel better again.
 
T
Malice is right, Orginal writing is much more fun then fanfics (most of the time only fanboys really like them anyway :I)
 

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